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Rekei healing therapy

Post  DanielTay on Fri Feb 15, 2013 1:43 pm

I like how the writer uses easy to comprehend vocabulary, they make something as hard as triggering the inner chakras of people into simple english. He stayed on topic throughout the writing. The essay had a nice flow, and after reaqding it i feel informed on a topic i never even knew about.

I didnt like how the end of the writing felt like it should have been after the first 2 paragraphs. The first paragrahp was like 2 sentences and he used the word "am" in the wrong context. from him saying its a controversial healing process i didnt know if he was for or against reiiki healing.

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